中考英语作文:温泉让我得到休息
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题目:请以“hot spring let me have a rest”为题,写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。
hot spring let me have a rest
温泉让我得到休息
we took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. when i first put my feet into the water. i cried out, "wow, it is hot!" i didn't know the water was so hot, and i was a little afraid that it would burn me...so i walked carefully into the spring. one step,two... i felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.
我们脱下外套,快速奔向柠檬泉,当我第一次把脚伸进水中时,我大声喊道:“哇,水是热的!”我一开始不知道水如此热,所以我有点儿担心会被热水烫到。于是,我小心翼翼地走进温泉,一步,两步......我能感觉到热量慢慢地进入我的身体。
点评:要写出生动有趣的事,除了把事情的来龙去脉说清楚,还一定要注意增加文章的细节,这是必不可少的,丰富的细节描写能为你的文章增色不少,使人读起来具有一种身临其境的感觉。另外,本篇时态运用十分得当,整篇文章的动词过去时一脉相承。
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