方面的变化。
写作要求:
1.词数在100左右。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺。
3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest …
b
阅读电视广告词:“if we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示:
1.生活离不开水。
2.可饮用水在减少。
3.水污染严重。
4.应保护水源,再利用水。
思路点拨与参考答案
a. [思路点拨]:
①文体:记叙文。
②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。
③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest.every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.they threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. some even made fires in the woods to cook food.how dangerous it was.luckily,great changes have taken place here.tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,