is read books①.when i was seven years old.i became interested in reading books.i like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.i can learn a lot of knowledge from books. books also② can teach me how to be a good person.books even can solve many problems for me.i will read more good books to improve myself.
①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
[点评]：档次9-11分。
①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。
②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
③有少量错误。
[学生习作b]
my hobby is reading.reading books is very enjoyable.when i was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.i went to bed every night.the stories were so interesting that i always felt they weren’t enough.so i began to read books by myself.little by little i became interested in reading.i can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.when i read books,i can enjoy the beautiful sentences.at the same time i can improve