----内容充实 行文流畅
很多同学抱怨英语作文是英语学习中最头疼的事情，下笔能言，但却漏洞百出。笔者有幸参加了2000年英语高考北京地区的阅卷工作，并收集了部分优秀作文。通过下面的这篇2000年高考满分作文，总结其中规律，希望能给今年考生带来些许帮助。
at 7:15 on the morning of feb.8.2000，i was footing eastward along the park road.i was about to reach the t-crossing near the city park when i noticed an old man coming out of the city park and was trying to cross the street.suddenly，a yellow car，which had come down the 3rd street，turned sharply right at the corner.it was driving so fast that neither the driver nor the old man was able to react effectively.regretfully，the woman driver did not stop to look after him but fled as quickly as possible.badly injured as he was，the old man tried to take down the car's number.however，i managed it：which was ac864.
这篇文章的特点是：内容充实，要点全面；语言丰富，文字优美；行文连贯，过渡自然。
高考英语作文主