know as little english as li ming does.
一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。
on/upon arriving home, i wrote down everything i had seen.
as soon as i arrived home, i wrote down everything i had seen.
the moment i arrived home, i wrote down everything i had seen.
the instant i arrived home, i wrote down everything i had seen.
no sooner had i arrived home than i wrote down everything i had seen.
昨天下午他才来。
he came here yesterday afternoon.
he didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.
not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
it was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.
it was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
谋篇的原则：
满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。
常见的句子之间的连接手段有：
使用代词指代上一句中的名词
重复使用上一句中的词
使用连接词